josh
28/9/2015 09:44:08 am
Have you ever met a pirate as fearless as a horse .
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JOSH
29/9/2015 09:42:23 am
She is so sweet and helpful. her ship is called the Glad Tidings.
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hugo
28/9/2015 09:46:31 am
Have you ever heard of a pirate called pirate Polly? Well let me tell you about her. If you look far over the sea you might see pirate Polly's ship. She has been training to be a pirate for years. Her pirate ship is called glad tidyings.
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hugo
29/9/2015 09:42:33 am
Her ebony hat has a skull on it and her clothes were not ripped ragged and dirty. She was not a mean pirate she was an upstanding pirate. Her master was called mad eyed mick and he was a mean pirate not like pirate Polly, he was a menace. He was a ordinary pirate, he was a non-exdrodinary pirate.
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grace.e
28/9/2015 09:47:05 am
If you in a dictactance of a foggy teal sea you might see a woden acent ship called the glad tidings.
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grace.e
29/9/2015 09:44:20 am
there lives a pirate named Pirate Polly.She weres a navie jaket and a pair of brown legins. She is very dainty she is freindly.
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maisie
28/9/2015 09:47:52 am
have you ever met a pirate well i will tell you about a pirate called pirate Polly she was as fearless as a trapped mouse.
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Maisie
29/9/2015 09:43:45 am
well she had old wooden achent ship called the Glad Tidings.
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poppy c
28/9/2015 09:48:02 am
Have you ever heard of a pirate called pirate Polly?She was only a little girl and she was a little girl long ago.And on the ship lived pirate Polly,a rat and a dog on the ship .
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Maisie
3/10/2015 07:10:41 am
Well done poppy
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Jess D
28/9/2015 09:54:15 am
Have you ever heard of a legend called Pirate Polly? Pirate Polly is feared as a scared cat and she has a generous beautiful warm heart and she is as generous as a enchanted beautiful bunny rabbit and she lives on a old dusty ship called the glad tidings. Would you like to meet the beautiful generous Pirate polly
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jessica
29/9/2015 10:34:21 am
And the glad tidings has the most beautiful captain room ever and she has a fearsome hairy enemy called mad eyed mick and Pirate Polly is not a real pirate she just dreams of being a pirate and her trusty side kicks are howler the dog and Rufus the rat.Rufus and howler keep one eyed pirate Polly safe and sound from harm.
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Maisie
29/9/2015 04:01:28 pm
Cute Jess.
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poppy c
30/9/2015 04:19:14 pm
Well done Jessica it's a really good description 😊☺👍
poppy c
30/9/2015 04:17:39 pm
I love your description Jessica ,it's very cute☺👍 well done
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Miss Madden
5/10/2015 08:28:18 pm
Some excellent descriptions of Pirate Polly. I particularly like the similes and vocabulary used.
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